Various tweaks to release notes

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2405.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2405.section.md
index c8b2e9ad047f5..fe2428cc796b1 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2405.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2405.section.md
@@ -24,11 +24,11 @@ In addition to numerous new and upgraded packages, this release has the followin
 
   This may be undesirable if nix commands are not going to be run on the built system since it adds nixpkgs to the system closure. For such closure-size-constrained non-interactive systems, this setting should be disabled.
 
-  To disable this, set [nixpkgs.flake.setNixPath](#opt-nixpkgs.flake.setNixPath) and [nixpkgs.flake.setFlakeRegistry](#opt-nixpkgs.flake.setFlakeRegistry) to false.
+  To disable it, set [nixpkgs.flake.setNixPath](#opt-nixpkgs.flake.setNixPath) and [nixpkgs.flake.setFlakeRegistry](#opt-nixpkgs.flake.setFlakeRegistry) to false.
 
 - NixOS AMIs are now uploaded regularly to a new AWS Account.
   Instructions on how to use them can be found on <https://nixos.github.io/amis>.
-  We are working on integration the data into the NixOS homepage.
+  We are working on integrating the data into the NixOS homepage.
   The list in `nixos/modules/virtualisation/amazon-ec2-amis.nix` will stop
   being updated and will be removed in the future.
 
@@ -45,9 +45,9 @@ In addition to numerous new and upgraded packages, this release has the followin
 - Lomiri (formerly known as Unity8) desktop mode, using Mir 2.x to function as a Wayland compositor, is now available and can be installed with `services.desktopManager.lomiri.enable = true`. Note that some core applications, services and indicators have yet to be packaged, and some functions may remain incomplete, but the base experience should be there.
 
 - MATE has been updated to 1.28.
-  - To properly support panel plugins built with Wayland (in-process) support, we are introducing `services.xserver.desktopManager.mate.extraPanelApplets` option, please use that for installing panel applets.
-  - Similarly, please use `services.xserver.desktopManager.mate.extraCajaExtensions` option for installing Caja extensions.
-  - To use the Wayland session, enable `services.xserver.desktopManager.mate.enableWaylandSession`. This is opt-in for now as it is in early stage and introduces a new set of Wayfire closure. Due to [known issues with LightDM](https://github.com/canonical/lightdm/issues/63), we suggest using SDDM for display manager.
+  - To properly support panel plugins built with Wayland (in-process) support, we are introducing the `services.xserver.desktopManager.mate.extraPanelApplets` option, please use that for installing panel applets.
+  - Similarly, please use the `services.xserver.desktopManager.mate.extraCajaExtensions` option for installing Caja extensions.
+  - To use the Wayland session, enable `services.xserver.desktopManager.mate.enableWaylandSession`. This is opt-in for now as it is in early an stage and introduces a new set of Wayfire closures. Due to [known issues with LightDM](https://github.com/canonical/lightdm/issues/63), we suggest using SDDM as the display manager.
 
 - Plasma 6 is now available and can be installed with `services.xserver.desktopManager.plasma6.enable = true;`. Plasma 5 will likely be deprecated in the next release (24.11). Note that Plasma 6 runs as Wayland by default, and the X11 session needs to be explicitly selected if necessary.
 
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ The pre-existing [services.ankisyncd](#opt-services.ankisyncd.enable) has been m
 - [armagetronad](https://wiki.armagetronad.org), a mid-2000s 3D lightcycle game widely played at iD Tech Camps. You can define multiple servers using `services.armagetronad.<server>.enable`.
 
 - [BenchExec](https://github.com/sosy-lab/benchexec), a framework for reliable benchmarking and resource measurement, available as [programs.benchexec](#opt-programs.benchexec.enable),
-  As well as related programs
+  as well as related programs
   [CPU Energy Meter](https://github.com/sosy-lab/cpu-energy-meter), available as [programs.cpu-energy-meter](#opt-programs.cpu-energy-meter.enable), and
   [PQoS Wrapper](https://gitlab.com/sosy-lab/software/pqos-wrapper), available as [programs.pqos-wrapper](#opt-programs.pqos-wrapper.enable).
 
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ The pre-existing [services.ankisyncd](#opt-services.ankisyncd.enable) has been m
 
 - [Jottacloud Command-line Tool](https://docs.jottacloud.com/en/articles/1436834-jottacloud-command-line-tool), a CLI for the [Jottacloud](https://jottacloud.com/) cloud storage provider. Available as [services.jotta-cli](#opt-services.jotta-cli.enable).
 
-- [keto](https://www.ory.sh/keto/), a permission & access control server, the first open source implementation of ["Zanzibar: Google's Consistent, Global Authorization System"](https://research.google/pubs/zanzibar-googles-consistent-global-authorization-system/).
+- [keto](https://www.ory.sh/keto/), a permission & access control server, the first open source implementation of [*Zanzibar: Google's Consistent, Global Authorization System*](https://research.google/pubs/zanzibar-googles-consistent-global-authorization-system/).
 
 - [manticoresearch](https://manticoresearch.com), easy to use open source fast database for search. Available as [services.manticore](#opt-services.manticore.enable).
 
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ The pre-existing [services.ankisyncd](#opt-services.ankisyncd.enable) has been m
 
 - [private-gpt](https://github.com/zylon-ai/private-gpt), a service to interact with your documents using the power of LLMs, 100% privately, no data leaks. Available as [services.private-gpt](#opt-services.private-gpt.enable).
 
-- [Prometheus DNSSEC Exporter](https://github.com/chrj/prometheus-dnssec-exporter), check for validity and expiration in DNSSEC signatures and expose metrics for Prometheus. Available as [services.prometheus.exporters.dnssec](#opt-services.prometheus.exporters.dnssec.enable).
+- [Prometheus DNSSEC Exporter](https://github.com/chrj/prometheus-dnssec-exporter): check for validity and expiration in DNSSEC signatures and expose metrics for Prometheus. Available as [services.prometheus.exporters.dnssec](#opt-services.prometheus.exporters.dnssec.enable).
 
 - [prometheus-nats-exporter](https://github.com/nats-io/prometheus-nats-exporter), a Prometheus exporter for NATS. Available as [services.prometheus.exporters.nats](#opt-services.prometheus.exporters.nats.enable).
 
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ The pre-existing [services.ankisyncd](#opt-services.ankisyncd.enable) has been m
 
 - `chromium` and `ungoogled-chromium` had a long-standing issue regarding Widevine DRM handling in nixpkgs fixed.
   `chromium` now no longer automatically downloads Widevine when encountering DRM protected content.
-  To be able to play DRM protected content in `chromium` now, you have to explicitly opt-in as originally intended using `chromium.override { enableWideVine = true; }`.
+  To be able to play DRM protected content in `chromium`, you now have to explicitly opt-in as originally intended using `chromium.override { enableWideVine = true; }`.
   This override was added almost 10 years ago.
 
 - `craftos-pc` package has been updated to v2.8, which includes [breaking changes](https://github.com/MCJack123/craftos2/releases/tag/v2.8).
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ The pre-existing [services.ankisyncd](#opt-services.ankisyncd.enable) has been m
   such as tensorflow. The original runfile-based `cudatoolkit` is still
   available as `cudatoolkit-legacy-runfile`.
 
-- `cudaPackages.nsight_systems` now has most vendored third party-libraries removed, though we now only ship it for `cudaPackages_11_8` and later, due to outdated dependencies. Users comfortable with the vendored dependencies may use `overrideAttrs` to amend the `postPatch` phase and the `meta.broken` correspondingly. Alternatively, one could package the deprecated `boost170` locally, as required for `cudaPackages_11_4.nsight_systems`.
+- `cudaPackages.nsight_systems` now has most vendored third-party libraries removed, though we now only ship it for `cudaPackages_11_8` and later, due to outdated dependencies. Users comfortable with the vendored dependencies may use `overrideAttrs` to amend the `postPatch` phase and the `meta.broken` correspondingly. Alternatively, one could package the deprecated `boost170` locally, as required for `cudaPackages_11_4.nsight_systems`.
 
 - `cudaPackages.autoFixElfFiles` has been deprecated for `pkgs.autoFixElfFiles`. Functionality has not changed, but the setuphook has been renamed and moved to the top-level package scope.
 
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ The pre-existing [services.ankisyncd](#opt-services.ankisyncd.enable) has been m
 
 - `erlang-ls` package no longer ships the `els_dap` binary as of v0.51.0.
 
-- `erlang_node_short_name`, `erlang_node_name`, `port` and `options` configuration parameters are gone, and have been replaced with an `environment` parameter.
+- `erlang_node_short_name`, `erlang_node_name`: `port` and `options` configuration parameters are gone, and have been replaced with an `environment` parameter.
     Use the appropriate [environment variables](https://hexdocs.pm/livebook/readme.html#environment-variables) inside `environment` to configure the service instead.
 
 - `firefox-devedition`, `firefox-beta`, `firefox-esr` executable file names for now match their package names, which is consistent with the `firefox-*-bin` packages. The desktop entries are also updated so that you can have multiple editions of firefox in your app launcher.